Very nice effort, but not a fan of the design for a few reasons:
The screen rim is too large. No need to make it that large, as it would add unnecessary weight and size.
If you taper all the sides like the MacBook Air, you lose the ability to easily have peripheral ports. I don't want things recessed like on the Air nor do I want something like having all the ports moved to an external port replicator-type device for the various jacks (Ethernet, video, USB, Firewire, audio) that would then connect to the MBP via a cable.
And burying the optical drive like that would make it more difficult to load/unload - especially on a black model where it would all be in shadow.