Fixed = mines are coal shafts. The "Mines" you described were banned at the geneva conventions.
Check yourself before critiquing the writing of others. A quick glance at a few of your prior posts tells a different story. You've failed the concept of both subordinating conjunction and pluperfects. I could list them, but I have a life. And, well, I'm not as lame as you.
Admittedly, society should thank you, for proofreading the internet can be a tedious and time consuming endeavor.
I must ask: Why? Do you derive some sort of gratification when you spot a clerical error, and thus, feel the need to attack the writer? Does putting them down make your pitiful life better? Are you just trying to help him? Are you just trying to clarify the messages for the readers? [I never would have understood it without your input.]
Naw, it's none of those... your inferiority complex compels you to correct his and other messages because you're either underemployed or unemployed and definitely a social retard.
While knowledge of formalistic, stylistic, and grammatical structures are important, not everyone has the resources to attend college or graduate school. So what is your justification for point out the flaw? You're somewhat implicitly calling him stupid. Should I point out your errors and illustrate your your stupidity? Nope. I'm not like that... I do not feel the need to put people down for superfluous reasons. (cool how I still got that in, huh?)
I really hope you're a 12 year old because if you're a grown man or woman.... oh jesus.
For me grammar is easy, but spelling, on the other hand, is not my forte. I'm a lawyer, which basically means I write for a living. I have dyslexia. So I hire liberal arts majors to proofread my briefs and motions. If you live in the Seattle area, look me up, I'll hire you on the spot: $9/hr. Better than what you're getting paid for proofreading this message board, right? If you're not interested, I'm sure you have the requisite qualifications for employment as a secretary.
Since I doubt I'll ever come back to this forum, all I really what to say is: you're a dick, and internet proofreaders are douchebags..... So I guess that makes you a dickity-douche.
Pot, I'd like to introduce you to kettle...