CompUser said:
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I like your left and right margins on for the first image, keep it and repeat it for all the pages. Consistancy consistancy.
Text is still stressed. (look how close it is to the top white Horizontal line )
Dont be afraid to move the text and images away from the edges, always make sure that there is enough space around the text blocks and images. When you butt up text and images right to an edge, it makes it very uncomfortable or stressed.
You need white space (unoccupied space) to help lead the viewers eye through the materials, I keep saying more space more space, but that is the reason why.
When you have lots of text and images taking up space, it appears as one solid block, the eye doesnt know where to go, and the viewer gets bored. By leaving more free space, its easier to look at and move through a layout, and makes it more interesting, the eyes see that there are more areas to explore.
The amount of space you left for the text wrap on the first page is good. Continue with whatever spacing you used, for any text wrap thoughout the layout.
Top Align the tables, center align the top right header of the right table. Try a thinner table weight, it will help improve the readability of the text
The interior with colors, the layout is too busy, my eyes are bouncing like a ping pong from side to side. Good start tough. Maybe shrink the images down a bit, move away from the edges (like the exterior) have all text on the left side of the images bottom aligned
Exterior page, shrink each image down a tiny bit to increase the space surrounding each image, text on the left is fine, but I would bottom align it
Last page, Top align text with image, center the contact info in the space between the bottom of the image and the the bottom of the blue area
Try reducing the top green area to match the dimensions of the bottom green area, theres a bit too much white space (dead space) which is making the brochure a bit too top heavy.
Edges of brochure, if you were to actually get this professionally printed, scored and folded, you would run into problems with text being and images cut off where it is too close to the edges
If this is a facing page layout, where you view the brochure like a magazine, think about the the alignment of the headers and footers of the pages.
Whould they be laid out the same for each page?
(for the left pages) I would move the logo over to the left side. After the text such as "interior Colors" add a small gap and place the logo.
(For the right pages) move the text over to the right side with the logo as is. The header "2006 Range Rover" I would also move to the right side.
Think of the fold area as an edge, a stress area. Things get lost and uncomfortable in this area.
Over all, keep going, your doing great.