Made an iPhone 5 Ad, want feedback!

[Macdude2010]

The second one isn't working for me but damn the first one is great!

Link work, thanks! I like that one as well.

Much better than I could do. Music good (already Applefied?). Having said that, need more instant changing among changes on screen. Was waiting for things to change on screen after tempo dictated change. Note: The second video didn't work for me. Overall, nice. Need the anal touch (figurative).

Link Fixed

 

[kanesw]

He just ripped the audio straight from a iPad 2 advert

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT3p_QLLJks

Then just cut together existing footage from the promo.



An hours work - max

 

[mainomega]

How the **** is this not on my tv ?

Honestly, needs a but more refining but you should be working at apple.

 

[Macdude2010]

How the **** is this not on my tv ?

Honestly, needs a but more refining but you should be working at apple.

thanks! and what do you mean refining, i would love some tips!

 

[Mercenary]

On the first one your shot lifespan is too long. Try shortening that down and it should feel better.