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Prologue.

The mists were rolling in.
He loved the mists. They were his friends, his ally.
He indulged at the opening of the caves for a few more minutes and then motioned to get back inside.
A lot of new recruits had arrived today, and he made a point to always meet them in person.
It usually motivated them and gratified them. It was very risky for anyone to join the rebellion, and he wanted to make sure they felt welcomed and appreciated.
But he also wanted to assess whether any Misting had showed up. With the increased Steel Ministry raids, Allomancers were becoming more precious by the day, and those who had the Gift tended to be quite tight-lipped about it.
However, being a Mistborn had its advantages, not only in battle. By combining seeking, rioting and soothing, he usually could nudge anyone to burn some metal, if they could, and reveal them as Mistings.
The core of his force was just regular folks, mostly skaa of course, but more mistings were essential if they were to have any chance of success. But they were rare, and –besides- employment by one of the High Houses in Luthadel, the Capital of the Empire, seemed to be a much better career path nowadays, than joining his ragtag army and its apparently impossible goal of overturning the Lord Ruler.

However, malcontent was growing in every Dominance, not only among the vexed Skaa, but also with many free-men and even some nobility. Not all of them approved of the indentured servitude system, nor the absolute power exerted by the Lord Ruler. And everybody hated the Steel Ministry and the Inquisitors. Especially since they had started rounding up the children.
So many. Nobody knew for sure what happened to them, but rumors abounded. None of them good.
And so his ranks were swelling.


Mscriv?”
A hooded figure had interrupted his thought. StonyC.
“The Mists are thick tonight”
“Ideal time for a spar!” Before he finished the sentence he had reached inside and consumed a bit of iron, used the resulting thin blue lines to identify a brass fire poker laying on a brazier right behind his Mistborn friend and pulled hard on it, at the same time he had dropped three coins on the ground, burned some steel and pushed on them, launching himself up in the air. As he was ascending, he flared tin to enhance his senses and see what StonyC was going to do.
StonyC pushed on the brass poker and easily deflected its path, while also dropping a few coins to launch himself after Mscriv, all while pulling his pair of obsidian knives from his sleeves.
They disappeared into the mists and their ‘friendly’ fight took them some distance from the entrance of the caves.
As StonyC avoided a flurry of coins by a quick Cadmium burst which created a small accelerated time-bubble that allowed him to move out of the way, he noticed a large number of thin blue lines materializing, pointing to the other side of the rock crop that protected they hiding base.
“What the *******?”
Mscriv had seen them too.
They both jumped to the top of the rock formation, where a Tineye lookout was supposed to be stationed.
She was there allright, but the cut across her throat had ensured no alarm was going to be raised.
“What is….” And then they saw them, through the mists, tin flaring.
A large band of Koloss, was marching in their direction. Their blue-gray splitting skin barely containing they bulging bodies. Their massive swords sending tens of thickening blue lines to their allomantic senses. They were not frenzied yet, but it was only a matter of time.
In their midst, a column of empire soldiers was advancing as well and behind them a group of hooded figures
“********* Inquisitors” muttered StonyC.
He took the Tineye’s horn laying on the ground of the lookout post, and blasted it three times.
 
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PMs with roles are being sent.
game will start shortly after.

please remember ALL NARRATION parts, including those in your background story, are for color only. there are no hidden infos in the narration.

the only game-relevant information is if you are a REBEL/INQUISITOR and your ROLE.

Queen of Spades, my PM to you is bouncing back.
can you enable PMing? thx.
 
PMs with roles are being sent.
game will start shortly after.

please remember ALL NARRATION parts, including those in your background story, are for color only. there are no hidden infos in the narration.

the only game-relevant information is if you are a REBEL/INQUISITOR and your ROLE.

Queen of Spades, my PM to you is bouncing back.
can you enable PMing? thx.

Are you sure? I got one earlier, and I just sent a test one to myself and it went through fine. I haven't changed any settings.
 
Awesomeness indeed. Love the narrative, love the world building, love the detailed background. Of course, I loved the books. Most of all, I really loved Sazad, and who - hailing from a background such as mine - could not?……(and yes, of course, I really hugely liked TenSoon & naturally, Vin herself, also).

Very well, then. As a scholar of Terris, there is much knowledge and vast lore which I must seek out and learn, and, above all, commit to memory and store for the benefit of future generations of our struggling world.
 
Fantastic beginning. Really enjoyed my backstory. :)

thanks.



just a short reminder

rebels=villagers
inquisitors=WW

there are 3 initial inquisitors plus one possible additional recruitment (infection)

players with 1x powers (COINSHOT, RIOTER, SOOTHER, PULSER, SLIDER, ORACLE, LEECHER, BURSTER, DURAL GNAT) have one shot at using it for the entire game, once it is used, you are not special anymore ;)
and remember you can use them either covertly or publicly (except the dural gnat).

players with every-night powers (SEER, LURCHER, TINEYE, SMOKER, SEEKER, AUGUR) get them at night via PM

thug and aluminum gnat are passive powers, so you don't need to do anything

there will be a deadline AND majority lock, whatever comes first, unless noted or affected by the game play
 
DAY 1. Somewhere in the Outer Dominance

As the mists cleared in the morning, the small group of survivors looked at each other in dismay.

It had been a massacre.

The attack had caught them completely unprepared.
When they heard the three horn blasts, most of the companies were busy with supper.
By the time they had donned their armor and found their weapons, the Koloss were upon them, flooding out of the Mists.
In full frenzy, they were nearly unbeatable.
Huge, strong and completely insensitive to pain, they would just charge on, easily taking on a dozen men at a time.
And there were so ******** many of them!
Mscriv and StonyC were fighting like demons. Their Tin flaring, they burned Iron and Steel, swirling with the mists around the bluish monsters, dancing in the air like lethal hummingbirds, hacking at them with all their Pewter-enhanced strength, Atium giving them a blueprint of their enemy’s next moves, and allowing them to avoid the flurries of arrows from the soldiers.
But for each of one they downed, two more were coming.
Elsewhere, the Rebel Allomancer units where doing their best, Lurchers were deflecting the metal-tipped arrows, Coinshots where pummeling the enemy with projectiles, Rioters and Soothers were collaborating to give their comrades courage and confidence, while diminishing that of their adversaries. Time-benders where trying to give them some sort of advantage, they time-bubbles shimmering in the air.
Everyone was contributing.

And for a time, is seemed like they might be able to pull it off.
While StonyC was anchoring the core of the army to hold the Koloss’ fury, Mscriv had managed to take the battle to the Inquisitors. After he downed two of the hooded figures, a large swat of the Koloss they were controlling got loose.
The dim-witted fighting machines lost focus and started fighting with each other, giving the exhausted troops a bit of much needed respite.

But then the metals started to run out. The ever-precious Atium was first, and both mscriv and StonyC were less able to avoid the koloss blows, or the Inquisitors’ attacks. The other metals soon followed and the tides of battle changed.
More and more of the Mistings, now powerless, turned around and run, only to be cropped down by the mighty swords of the koloss. StonyC was the first one to fall, smashed by the simultaneous cross-blows of two 12-feet Koloss.
Mscriv had retreated to the cave with a small group of soldiers and Mistings. But his wounds were severe, and he was hanging on only by sustained Pewter burning. Once that was finished, there was no way he could survive.

“Not all is lost” he whispered, looking at the despair transpiring by the small group’s eyes, and pulled out a small steel ingot from his cloack, pushing it into the hands of Imaketouchtheme who was closest to him. “Now go! all of you!”
As Plutonius and –Aggie- shouted orders and direction to reach a secret passage down in the caves, a few decided to remain, for a hopless last stand next to their old friend.
“Pointless”, commented Chrmjenkins shaking his head and following the others “ what use can we be if we are dead?”


They were still in disbelief. They had raced through the tunnels for what seemed like hours and eventually made it out, high in the mountains. But it was all hazy.
Sceptical scribe was examining the steel ingot with curiosity. When she pushed one of the metal markings over it, something clicked inside.
“it opens!” she exclaimed.
“it’s a map” added Queen of Spades from over her shoulder.
“Right now, I don’t give a koloss’ dump if it is a map or a unicorn.” Interrupted Tomorrow, materializing the thoughts everyone was thinking, “How the **** did they find us?”

..............................

The game has started
It is now Day 1. Deadline is tomorrow May 8th, at 10 P. M. EST
Majority is 10.
Vote away.
 
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But this is truly wonderful story-telling; and yes, I do, indeed, love maps, especially somewhat antiquated ones, where the dimensions are not quite…..perfect…and may be enhanced by imagination as much as known boundaries, dimensions, and proportions.

However, as a Terris scholar, I am of a bookish disposition, and have fallen into the habit of seeking evidence, or facts and patterns of behaviour or weather before coming to any abrupt, or perhaps precipitate - or, merely extraordinarily unjust - conclusions concerning the motivations, or the actions, of my colleagues in the Rebel movement.

Therefore, for now, I see no need to cast aspersions, or premature judgement on anyone, at least not until we know a little more about what may have happened.
 
Quick query: anyone else reads that as Tetris scholar?

Going with Touchmyself since he didn't change username although some vague promises were made. Can we trust him?
 
Quick query: anyone else reads that as Tetris scholar?

Going with Touchmyself since he didn't change username although some vague promises were made. Can we trust him?

Unfortunately, some of the rather obscure texts I have read would seem to suggest that our world's shape, size, continents, physical features, tectonic plates, even its very weather patterns, have altered dramatically - or been transformed beyond recognition - since The Lord Ruler……..ascended to power, in his words…….or seized power, as the Rebel Movement would prefer to regard it.

So, my noble friend twietee, I am not perturbed by your perfectly natural confusion of Tetris with Terris, my homeland, the inhabitants of which the Lord Ruler dislikes with a rare, but intense and rather consuming, passion.
 
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