^^Welcome. Nice to see that we are adding another woman to the roster. Very nice capture of expression. The background is a bit bright and detracts a bit from the photo. That's hard to manage without losing the detail in the face for a portrait. Maybe if you cropped a bit off from the top it would improve it. Overall, a nice first post.
Dale
Thanks, Dale, for the welcome and C&C
I know that the background is way too bright. I did think about adjusting the brightness, but then the face would be too dark (at least with my editing skills). We were inside this cafe (well, it had no walls so in fact we were just underneath a roof), so I guess having the lighting balanced (at least for a non-professional) is challenging. Cropping also crossed my mind, but if I wanted to constrain the aspect ratio of the photo and crop from the top, it would also result in cropping his arm and I kind of like his "mature" pose, leaning to the table. Vignette made it better, thanks NeGRit0
Puulihuna