Nope, it reads perfectly because "You" represents the data you give up to Apple about yourself.This board is full of haters, but also full of people that think Bad Apple review = Fake.
Like Apple cannot do anything bad.
The thing is, the issue lies in Apple's review mechanism, how can one rate something that has not purchased?
It is hard to implement a "verified purchase" a la Amazon?
I find it entertaining to read some comments (as in some are really stupid), from both sides, and I believe the truth is in the middle.
Since Apple is a company (so nothing against Apple pre se) it should read:
"
Your money is very important to us!!!!
*Your opinions, not so much....
"

Therefore You and Your money are important.