Oh, Ron Moore. 🙁
I think it was Robert McKee who said that you’re much more likely to be forgiven for giving a weak story a strong ending than a strong story a weak ending. Not that I thought would come right out and call this episode weak (or, indeed, this ending strong), but it is pretty much more of the same. Connect the dots. The major turning point of the episode is when Adama changes his mind, for goodness’s sake. I am normally a worshipper of Ron Moore’s plotting and eloquence, but it would have taken a great deal to reclaim my opinion after the first third of episode was dedicated to flashbacks, and it never arrived. The red line was a nice set piece, and the sole moment of the episode that I felt engaged, but only superficially, since it still strikes me as strange that anyone, besides Roslin and a handful of others, could comprehend Hera’s significance enough to be willing to risk their lives for her.
I’m getting tired of hoping that things that are introduced in this show will eventually make sense or seem significant. Learning more about Baltar’s daddy issues helps us understand the character, but this is a character that everyone already takes for granted (the plot seems to be there more for Caprica Six). The same goes for Roslin. What does knowing that her family was killed in a car accident tell us that her diagnosis with cancer didn’t? And this is leaving aside that flashbacks are on many levels completely nondramatic. It’s very hard to create suspense out of events that happened years ago. Their purpose, even when they are used masterfully (like The West Wing’s “Two Cathedrals”), is to support and enrich action that exists in the present. Even then they are treacherous because they are basically “explanation.” It’s like when someone is telling you this really compelling joke (jokes are nothing but suspense) and then goes “oh I forgot to mention, the guy is actually married” or whatever. It doesn’t help that flashback puts the author front and center. There’s nothing wrong with that in itself, but it can come across as quite a crude way to make a point.
There just isn’t much to say about this episode. It’s still setup, like the last million episodes before it. Like an increasingly complicated joke, it’s becoming less and less likely that the punchline is going to be worth it. In a way, I’m glad to have the opportunity to say so, because I was beginning to be worried that I was capable only of a blind admiration for Ron Moore.